Teacher Feedback

Today, we had our teacher sit down and look over how far we have got with the film opening. All the titles have been written up, most of the editing (cuts) have been completed and a few effects have been placed on some of the clips.

Our Teacher feedback:

1. 00:02:16- At this time the cut look insufficient. The lighting goes from yellow to green and the cut seems unnecessary. The cut doesn't need to be there as it isn't cutting out any time. 
2. We shouldn't  have our title towards the beginning of a film. Ours is in an irregular place. 
3. The titles need to be sorted out as the fonts are different and the sizes are irregular. It looks messy and all the shots don't relate. 
4. On the shot where the title 'production designer' comes up, the lighting is too dark compared to the rest of the shots in the scene. 
5. The title which states 'director' needs to be sorted out as there is a capital in the middle of the word.
6. Add more diegetic sound. 

We have taken this feedback on board and have decided too alter a few things within our film opening to make it more efficient and try to achieve the grade which we desire. For the diegetic sound, we are inserting the rest of the sound that has been deleted from the clips. In addition we came up with an idea that we do a voice over at the beginning and copy a script from an old race to try and piece together all of the different events within the opening. Our teacher also suggested that we could add a voice over of a variety of voices that are negative when Sophie appears. She thought this would make the viewers understand more of what is going on however we did not seem to understand this idea or think it would make the film seem more logical.